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the population shown in graph depicts the fast food consumption. summarize this report

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The graph illustrates the junk food consumed by both genders in year 2015. All units are measured in percentage. Overall, male in all four different section tends to eat more unhealthy food compare to female. However, as the age is increasing the participation to eat junk food is decreasing. Looking at the details, the most youngest group among all had topped the list with holding around 17 percentage for gents and one percentage less for ladies. Moreover, the involvement drastically decreased for the people who are in 35 to 49 year old and stucked roughly at 11 percent for men and nearly 9 for women although nearly 9 percent of males and close to 8 percentage of female population who were 50 to 64 year old, prioritized the fast food. On the other hand, people over 65 year preferred the unhealthy least all 4 sections with just close to 5 percent for men whereas, ladies approximately 3 percent shown the interest.
The graph illustrates the junk food consumed by both genders in
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2015. All units
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section tends to eat more unhealthy food compare to female.
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, as the age is increasing the participation to eat junk food is decreasing.

Looking at the
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, the
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group among all had topped the list with holding around 17 percentage for gents and one percentage less for ladies.
Moreover
, the involvement
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decreased for the
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who are in 35 to 49
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of males and close to 8 percentage of female population who were 50 to 64
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, prioritized the
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over 65
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preferred the unhealthy least all 4 sections with
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shown the interest.
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