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The diagram below shows the stages in the production of silk

The diagram below shows the stages in the production of silk NmLmb

The given diagram depicts the multi-stage process of producing silk. At first glance, it is easy to realize that silk is made through a six-stage process, starting from bombyx mori moth lays 350-400 eggs on leaf and ending at the thread weaving into silk fabric. Looking at the diagram more closely, one can see that the process begins when 350-400 eggs are laid on a leaf by bombyx mori moth, and then tiny black silkworms hatch 7-20 days later. The second step is that people provide silkworms with large quantities of mulberry leaves and they grow quickly to 3 inches (70 times original size). After 25-28 days, silkworms spin cocoons around themselves (held together by silk gum). Following that, cocoons are boiled, and then silk gum softens, so simultaneously it is easy to unwind individual silk filaments. In the closest last step, silk filaments are spun into thread and come to be very fine and strong. Eventually, the thread is weaved into fabric.

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 diagram depicts the multi-stage process of producing silk.

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 glance, it is easy to realize that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
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mori
 moth lays 350-400 eggs on leaf and ending at the thread weaving into You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 fabric.

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see
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begins
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bombyx
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 moth, and then tiny black silkworms hatch 7-20 days later. The second step is that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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 they grow quickly
 to 3 inches (This conversion doesn't seem right, unable to recognize the used unit.ca. 8 cm7.62 cmca. 8 centimeters7.62 centimetersca. 76 mm76.2 mm
70 times original size
). After 25-28 days, silkworms spin cocoons around themselves (held together by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 gum). Following that, cocoons are boiled
, and then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 gum softens, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
simultaneously
 it is easy to unwind individual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 filaments. In the closest last step, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthreadfibertaffetatulle
silk
 filaments are spun
 into thread and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
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very
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, the thread is Consider using a past participle here: "woven".woven
weaved
 into fabric. 