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The pie chart below shows a snapshot of the UK power mix in 2014.

The pie chart below shows a snapshot of the UK power mix in 2014. 0nyp9
The given pie chart represents the different kinds of powers used in UK in the year 2014. It can be seen that over the entire year, gas and coal accounted for the high usage which combinely comes to more than half (60%) of the powers used in the contry in 2014. During the same year while rest of the powers generated was 40 % among which the percentage of Nuclear power is high (19%). On the other hand the wind and the bio energy utilized were 9. 5 % and 6. 8 % respectively. In addition the amount of the power used in hydro accounted to 1. 8% which is almost equal to the power used in solar that is 1. 2 %. Although the other source of powers used comes to 1. 8 %. In conclusion, the coal and the gas power usage was high in the year 2014 when compared with rest of the powers combinely.
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2014. It can be
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, gas and coal accounted for the high usage which
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During the same
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while rest of the
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generated was 40 % among which the percentage of Nuclear
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is high (19%).
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the wind and the bio energy utilized were 9. 5 % and 6. 8 %
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in hydro accounted to 1. 8% which is almost equal to the
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in solar
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, the coal and the gas
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usage was high in the
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2014 when compared with rest of the
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