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the bar chart shows the degree of worry of people about various problems. Write an essay identifying the key points.

the bar chart shows the degree of worry of people about various problems. Write an essay identifying the key points. Kw3Mk
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of different problems. Overall, most of people concerned about global problems and their negative impact on the environment. Accorting to the data, the most serious problems for respondents are chemicals put into river and the sea and getting rid of nuclear waste (more than 57%). On the other side, the fewest number of people worried about problems such as noize from traffic ugly new buildings and lack of acces to open spaces (less than 18%). Also, problems with insepticides, dirty beaches and bathing water, destruction of wildlife have equal persantage (40%). Futhermore, oil slicks from ships, fumes and smoke from factories
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for respondents are chemicals put into river and the sea and getting rid of nuclear waste (more than 57%). On the other side, the fewest number of
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IELTS academic the bar chart shows the degree of worry of people about various problems. Write an essay identifying the key points.

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  American English
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106 words
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