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show the changes of visitors number in 3 major airports in New York city ?

show the changes of visitors number in 3 major airports in New York city? 7a0EA

The chart depicts the number of passengers using plane to travel in three major airport in New York city from 1995 to 2000 It can be seen that there was an upward trending in LaGuardia while two others didn’t have any clearly trends The number of people using three airport all increased between 1995 and 1997. And John F. Kennedy airport aso had the highest passengers in 1997 and during 5 years However there was a surprised report in 1998 when Jhn F. Kennedy had the lowset umber of travellers althought 2 others still increased. The trending in three airport not changed till 200. People visited John F. Kennedy and LaGuardia increased dramarically while Newark airport hadn’t have any change after 3 year

The chart depicts the number of passengers using This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 to travel in three major Possible agreement error. The noun 'airport' seems to be countable, so consider using: "airports".airports
airport
 in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.New York City
New York city
 from 1995 to 2000

It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there was an upward trending in LaGuardia while two others didn’t have any clearly
 trends

The number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 using three Possible agreement error. The noun 'airport' seems to be countable, so consider using: "airports".airports
airport
 all increased between 1995 and 1997. And John F. Kennedy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrunwayinstallationairfieldairstrip
airport
Possible spelling mistake found.assoalsoagoaskash
aso
 had the highest passengers in 1997 and during 5 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphyears.years!years?years:years,years;
years


Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 there was a surprised report in 1998 when Possible spelling mistake found.JohnJonJunJanJpnAHN
Jhn
 F. Kennedy had the Possible spelling mistake found.lowestlow set
lowset
 umber of Possible spelling mistake found.travelers
travellers
Possible spelling mistake found.although
althought
 2 others still
 increased. The trending in three Possible agreement error. The noun 'airport' seems to be countable, so consider using: "airports".airports
airport
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 till 200. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 visited John F. Kennedy and LaGuardia increased Possible spelling mistake found.dramatically
dramarically
 while Newark You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrunwayinstallationairfieldairstrip
airport
Did you mean "hadn’t had"?hadn’t had
hadn’t have
 any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 after 3 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphyear.year!year?year:year,year;
year