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The bar chart shows the amount of money spent on two type of electrical item in country X.

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The tabular graph representation depicts the ratio of money spent on two type of electronic equipment in community X in year 2011 and 2015. A most eye-catching features to be noted that is, the amount of computers spent by buyer is grew up in between 2011 to 2015 and it is the highest one in all three years. To begin with, from 2011 to 2013 the range of dollars spent by individuals as similar about 10 million dollar wherever if we notice and compare 2013 and 2014 for smartphones then it was quickly grew up from 10 tones to 30 Lots. Moreover, if we notice then the customer of computers is steadily grew up in each year by 5 dollar and it can be sight from the tabular data that in 2011 the sale of touch phone is further by $20 when the marketing as a rise up, then it was more smaller ratio in comparison. Furthermore, the interesting fact to be noted that is in 2011 the range of computers is about $30 and it was actually saman 2014 in smartphones where it illustrates it takes three years to develop after that in 2015 the value of screen touch mobile is merely dollar 5 which is less from computers.
The tabular graph representation depicts the ratio of money spent on two type of electronic equipment in community X in
year
2011 and 2015.

A most eye-catching features to
be noted
that is
, the amount of computers spent by buyer is
grew
up in
between 2011 to 2015
and it is the highest one in all three years. To
begin
with, from 2011 to 2013 the range of
dollars
spent by individuals as similar about 10 million
dollar
wherever if we notice and compare 2013 and 2014 for smartphones then it was
quickly
grew
up from 10 tones to 30 Lots.
Moreover
, if we notice then the customer of computers is
steadily
grew
up in each
year
by 5
dollar
and it can be sight from the tabular data that in 2011 the sale of touch phone is
further
by $20 when the marketing as a rise up, then it was
more smaller
ratio
in comparison
.

Furthermore
, the interesting fact to
be noted
that is
in 2011 the range of computers is about $30 and it was actually
saman
2014 in smartphones where it illustrates it takes three years to develop after that in 2015 the value of screen touch mobile is
merely
dollar
5 which is less from computers.
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