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The bar chart reveals statistics about how five portions of fruit and vegetables were utilized per day by the UK between 2001 and 2008

The bar chart reveals statistics about how five portions of fruit and vegetables were utilized per day by the UK between 2001 and 2008 VEbOJ

The bar chart reveals statistics about how five portions of fruit and vegetables were utilized per day by the UK between 2001 and 2008. Overall, the percentage of people consuming five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in British fluctuated over the period. The figures for the consumption of men and children remained unchanged from 2001 to 2003 while an uptrend was recorded in the ones for women. In addition, the percentage of British women eating five portions of fruit and vegetables per day was highest in all years. The figures for the consumption of men and children experienced a substantial increase from 2004 to 2006. In 2007, the figures for the consumption of British men did not see any change while the one for children peaked at roughly 26% before falling moderately to over 24% at the end of the period. Besides, the figures for women also peaked at 33% in 2006 then went down slowly to over 32% at the end

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