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The bar chart provides information about Someland’s main export businesses “Meat products”, “Dairy products” and “International tourism”.

The bar chart provides information about Someland’s main export businesses “Meat products”, “Dairy products” and “International tourism”. g59qD
The bar chart provides information about Someland’s main export businesses “Meat products”, “Dairy products” and “International tourism”. It covers a twenty-year period and displays the years of 2005 and 2015 and a future prediction for 2025. For 2005 “International tourism” had the biggest greatest turnover with at just over $6 billion, followed by “Dairy products” with at about $4. 5 billion and “Meat products” with at $4 billion. However, for 2015 positions for “International tourism” and “Dairy products” switched and the second mentioned has had an enormous growth up to nearly $8 billion in turnover. “Meat products” remained lowest and even lost around $0. 5 billion. For future predictions “International tourism” and “Dairy products” are expected to switch again and “International tourism’s” steady growth is expected to continue up to $8 billion. “Meat products” on the other hand, are predicted to decrease even further down to nearly $3 billion in 2025. Overall, “Meat products” decrease over the period of 20 years. “International tourism” and “Dairy products” are steadily growing, with “Dairy products” showing a strong increase and then a slight loss of turnover and “International tourism” growing throughout
The bar chart provides information about
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Someland
’s main export businesses
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“Meat
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products”
,
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“Dairy
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products”
and
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“International
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tourism”
. It covers a twenty-year period and displays the years of 2005 and 2015 and a future prediction for 2025.

For 2005
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“International
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tourism”
had the biggest
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greatest
turnover with at
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just
over $6
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billion
, followed by
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“Dairy
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products”
with at about $4. 5
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billion
and
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“Meat
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products”
with at $4
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billion
.
However
, for 2015 positions for
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“International
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tourism”
and
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“Dairy
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products”
switched and the second mentioned has had an enormous growth up to
nearly
$8
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billion
in turnover.
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“Meat
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products”
remained lowest and even lost around $0. 5 billion.

For future predictions
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“International
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tourism”
and
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“Dairy
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products”
are
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expected
to switch again and
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“International
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tourism’s”
steady growth is
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expected
to continue up to $8
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billion
.
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“Meat
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products”
on the other hand
,
are predicted
to decrease even
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down to
nearly
$3
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billion
in 2025.

Overall
,
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“Meat
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products”
decrease over the period of 20 years.
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“International
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tourism”
and
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“Dairy
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products”
are
steadily
growing, with
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“Dairy
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products”
showing a strong increase and then a slight loss of turnover and
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“International
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tourism”
growing throughout
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IELTS academic The bar chart provides information about Someland’s main export businesses “Meat products”, “Dairy products” and “International tourism”.

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