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The bar chart indicates how people who aged 25 to 34 are housed in UK from 2004 to 2014 in percentages.

The bar chart indicates how people who aged 25 to 34 are housed in UK from 2004 to 2014 in percentages. aAM67
The bar chart indicates how people who aged 25 to 34 are housed in UK from 2004 to 2014 in percentages. Based on this chart those people were two groups those who were owners and those who were renters. In 2004 the number of people aged 24 – 35 who were home owners was almost 60 percent, and it shows the highest number of home owners among years 2004 to 2014. 2014 had the lowest number of home owners with over 30 percent of people aged 24–35. Overall the percentages of home ownership dropped steadily during these years in UK. only There was a significant fall from 2009 to 2014. Started 2004 in UK the number of renters aged 24–35 based on percentages increased gradually from 20 % to only over 20 % percent until 2008, that we can’t see even 10 % percent decrease during this period. From 2008 to 2011 this percentage sharply climbed to over 40%. It was stable till 2012, but again had a modest rise from 2012 to 2014. In general the number of home owners aged 24 to 35 were more than the renters in UK, that percentage of home owners decreased from 2004 to 2014 but in contrast the number of renters increased.
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aged
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are housed
in UK from 2004 to 2014 in
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percentages
. Based on this chart those
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were two groups those
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owners
and those
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were renters.

In 2004 the
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number
of
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people
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aged
24 – 35
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who
were home
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owners
was almost 60
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, and it
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the highest
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number
of home
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owners
among years 2004 to 2014. 2014 had the lowest
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of home
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owners
with over 30
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percent
of
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people
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aged
24–35.
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the
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percentages
of home ownership dropped
steadily
during these years in UK.
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There was a significant fall from 2009 to 2014.

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Started
2004 in UK the
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of renters
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aged
24–35 based on
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increased
gradually
from 20 % to
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over 20 %
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until 2008, that we can’t
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even 10 %
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percent
decrease during this period. From 2008 to 2011 this
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sharply
climbed to over 40%. It was stable till 2012,
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again had a modest rise from 2012 to 2014.

In general
the
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number
of home
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owners
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24 to 35 were more than the renters in UK, that
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percentage
of home
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owners
decreased from 2004 to 2014
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in contrast
the
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number
of renters increased.
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