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The maps describe a small town before and after the constructions of several facilities from 2000 to present.

The maps describe a small town before and after the constructions of several facilities from 2000 to present. wxjVl

The maps describe a small town before and after the constructions of several facilities from 2000 to present. Overall, a closer look at the maps highlights the fact that the town was totally transformed in a number of different ways. Some housings were constructed, and farmland was desappeared. In the north-west of the village, the farmland was converted into new park. Main road at the south-west was extended to the west. Along this main avenue are still-stable shops, and just across the street is a market, now replaced by restaurants. there was a dock in front of the market that has now disappeared. A carpark has been built close to the hotel in the village's east end, which has seen some changes as well. At the north-east of the village, a small road was widen, and both sides of the road was surrounded by housings. A large number of dwellings were constructed at the west of the village.

The maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 town This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and after the constructions of several facilities from 2000 to present.

Overall
, a closer look at the maps highlights the fact that the town was totally
 transformed in a number of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 ways. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 housings were constructed
, and farmland was Possible spelling mistake found.disappeared
desappeared
.

In the north-west of the village, the farmland was converted
 into new park. Main road at the south-west was extended
 to the west. Along this main avenue are still
-stable shops, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 across the street is a market, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 replaced by restaurants. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThere
there
 was a dock in front of the market that has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 disappeared.

A Possible spelling mistake found.car parkcarp ark
carpark
 has been built
 close to the hotel in the village's east This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, which has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
as well
. At the north-east of the village, a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 road was Consider using a past participle here: "widened".widened
widen
, and both sides of the road was surrounded
 by housings. Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"ManyNumerous
A large number of
 dwellings were constructed
 at the west of the village. 