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The bar chart represents the main exports of its country Southland like International tourism, Dairy products and meat products over the years 2000, 2021 and 2025

The bar chart represents the main exports of its country Southland like International tourism, Dairy products and meat products over the years 2000, 2021 and 2025 0EgrB
The bar chart represents the main exports of its country Southland like International tourism, Dairy products and meat products over the years 2000, 2021 and 2025. In the current year, the highest rate of export is expected for Dairy products while - tourism stays in the second position by having meat products at the least. However, two decades ago International tourism stands first with a turnover of 9 billion dollars and dairy products with 7 billion dollars whereas meat products with 6 billion dollars. Besides for the upcoming 2025 year, it is expected to have international tourism will be leading with 10 billion dollars and dairy products with 9. 5billion dollars and the least products that may be exported is meat with 5 billion dollars. Overall, International tourism was developed gradually for complete period unlike the exportation of meat which started showing decline.
The bar chart represents the main exports of its country Southland like
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meat
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products
over the years 2000, 2021 and 2025. In the
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Dairy
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stays in the second position by having
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meat
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products
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International
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billion
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dairy
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with 7
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billion
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for the upcoming 2025 year, it is
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5billion
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billion
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International
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tourism
was developed
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IELTS academic The bar chart represents the main exports of its country Southland like International tourism, Dairy products and meat products over the years 2000, 2021 and 2025

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