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The bar chart illustrates the rate of the UK population consuming five portions of fruit and vegetables daily between 2001 to 2008.

The bar chart illustrates the rate of the UK population consuming five portions of fruit and vegetables daily between 2001 to 2008. ORJ0p

Taking a deep glance at the graph, it can be seen that over the period whole, the number of people who eating fruit had increased. In addition to this, it was also seen, that women belonging to this category outperformed men and children. At the beginning of this part of women was just 20, which the number was approximately twice as many as children and males. After that gradually their share increased to 30 percent in the 2006 year, later it slightly decreased by the end of the period, still staying on top of the other groups. On the other hand children, it remained the lowest category with a population of 10 percent and near the 2007 year growth immediately reaching a high of around 25 percentage, ending of the term in the 2008 year at the level of slightly less than 25 percent. In addition, the men's schedule was almost similar to the scheme, however, for many years he still took second place.

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