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The bar chart illustrates the rate of males and females in different age groups living individually while the number of bedrooms in these Single-occupant houses can (could?) be seen in the par chart during 2011.

The bar chart illustrates the rate of males and females in different age groups living individually while the number of bedrooms in these Single-occupant houses can (could? ) be seen in the par chart during 2011. kxbnO
The bar chart illustrates the rate of males and females in different age groups living individually while the number of bedrooms in these Single-occupant houses can (could? ) be seen in the par chart during 2011. Overall, the percentage of females was greater than that of males in people aged 65 and over whereas the opposite was true for people who were under 50 years old. Meanwhile, those kinds of households with no more than 3 bedrooms were the most popular categories in single-occupant households. Looking at the detail in the bar chart, as the whole in all ages living alone, females made of 55% which was quite higher than that of males (45%). The same percentage between males and females were recorded in people aged 50-64 (50%). In the age groups of 16-49, the proportion of males was greater than that of females as opposed to people in the remaining age groups (65 and over), accounting for under 40%. Moving into the pie chart, in an individual-family house, the most favorite room was 2 bedrooms occupying 35, 4%. The quantities of 3 bedrooms and 1 bedroom were lower, constituting 29, 8% and 28% respectively. Merely 5, 3% of rooms was 4 bedrooms compared a tiny percentage of 5 and more bedrooms (1. 4%)
The bar
chart
illustrates the rate of
males
and
females
in
different
age
groups living
individually
while the number of
bedrooms
in these Single-occupant
houses
can (could?
)
be
seen
in the par
chart
during 2011.

Overall
, the percentage of
females
was greater than that of
males
in
people
aged 65 and over whereas the opposite was true for
people
who were under 50 years
old
. Meanwhile, those kinds of households with no more than 3
bedrooms
were the most popular categories in single-occupant households.

Looking at the detail in the bar
chart
, as the whole in all
ages
living alone,
females
made of 55% which was quite higher than that of
males
(45%).

The same percentage between
males
and
females
were recorded
in
people
aged 50-64 (50%). In the
age
groups of 16-49, the proportion of
males
was greater than that of
females
as opposed to
people
in the remaining
age
groups (65 and over), accounting for under 40%.

Moving into the pie
chart
, in an individual-family
house
, the most favorite room was 2
bedrooms
occupying 35, 4%. The quantities of 3
bedrooms
and 1
bedroom
were
lower, constituting 29, 8% and 28%
respectively
.
Merely
5, 3% of rooms was 4
bedrooms
compared a tiny percentage of 5 and more
bedrooms
(1. 4%)
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the rate of males and females in different age groups living individually while the number of bedrooms in these Single-occupant houses can (could? ) be seen in the par chart during 2011.

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