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Overall, the number of males living alone in England was slightly lower than that of females. It is noticeable that these one-person households with two bedrooms were the most popular.

Overall, the number of males living alone in England was slightly lower than that of females. It is noticeable that these one-person households with two bedrooms were the most popular. lXd31
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females of different ages living alone in England while the pie chart shows how many bedrooms in a single household in 2011. Overall, the number of males living alone in England was slightly lower than that of females. It is noticeable that these one-person households with two bedrooms were the most popular. In the two age groups (35-49) and (25-34), the percentage of males who lived alone was higher than females, around 64% and 61% respect
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females of
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ages living alone in England while the pie chart
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bedrooms in a single household in 2011.

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, the number of males living alone in England was
slightly
lower than that of females. It is noticeable that these one-person households with two bedrooms were the most popular.

In the two age groups (35-49) and (25-34), the percentage of males who
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alone was higher than females, around 64% and 61% respect
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IELTS academic Overall, the number of males living alone in England was slightly lower than that of females. It is noticeable that these one-person households with two bedrooms were the most popular.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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