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The chart describes mandatory procedures in applying for a driving license in the United States.

The chart describes mandatory procedures in applying for a driving license in the United States. ra61J
The chart describes mandatory procedures in applying for a driving license in the United States. Overall, a driving license candidate has to pass three compulsory tests to possess a driving license, which consists of an eyesight test, the written exam, and the practical exam. First of all, the applicants for the driving permission arrive at the driving license center to fill in the forms. A vision test is provided right afterward, the result of which decides whether an applicant is eligible to receive the driving license or not. On passing the eyesight test, every candidate is required to pay a fee in order to take the written exam. If he/ she passes both the written exam in tandem with the road exam successfully, he/ she will be given a driving license. In case the applicants fail their first written tests, they are offered two more chances without paying any extra fee. However, if they fail the written test three times or perform unprofessionally in the practical exam just once, the test takers need to pay more fees and start again from the written test.
The chart
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describes
mandatory procedures in applying for a
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driving
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license
in the United States.

Overall
, a
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driving
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license
candidate
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has to
pass three compulsory
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tests
to possess a
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driving
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license
, which consists of an eyesight
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test
, the
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written
exam, and the practical exam.

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First of all
, the applicants for the
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driving
permission arrive at the
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driving
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license
center to fill in the forms. A vision
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test
is provided
right afterward, the result of which decides whether an applicant is eligible to receive the
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driving
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license
or not.

On passing the eyesight
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test
, every candidate
is required
to pay a fee in order to take the
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written
exam. If he/ she passes both the
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written
exam in tandem with the road exam
successfully
, he/ she will be
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given
a
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driving
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license
. In case the applicants fail their
first
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written
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tests
, they
are offered
two more chances without paying any extra fee.
However
, if they fail the
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written
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test
three times or perform
unprofessionally
in the practical exam
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just
once, the
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test
takers need to pay more fees and
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start
again from the
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written
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test
.
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IELTS academic The chart describes mandatory procedures in applying for a driving license in the United States.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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