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the bar chart illustrates the proportion of households who owned cars in a specific European country over a three decade period from 1971 to 2001.

the bar chart illustrates the proportion of households who owned cars in a specific European country over a three decade period from 1971 to 2001. Overall, there were dramatic downward trend for the number of family without cars while this figure for those who obsessed one or more cars improving. Another interesting point is that the total number of cars used in each household raise over the period given. Looking at details, in 1972 nearly half of population did not have any car compared to just 15% households using two or more cars. However, this figure for the rest of period for families had no car fell steadily, hit a trough at around 27% which was just a half of its figure in the initial point. Meanwhile, the percentage of people who had more than one car experienced a remarkable fluctuation between 27% and 20% above till the end of the period. On the other hand, the proportion of household who owned only one car just made up 35% of the total population then dropped slightly by 5% in the next decade. However, this figure for families had one car has surpassed other groups, ranking the first place since 1991 and finished the period at around 43%
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owned
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in a specific European country over a three decade
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period
from 1971 to 2001.

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, there were dramatic downward trend for the number of family without
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cars
while this
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figure
for those
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who
obsessed one or more
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cars
improving. Another interesting point is that the total number of
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cars
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used
in each
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household
raise over the
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period
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given
.

Looking at
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details
, in 1972
nearly
half of population did not have any
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car
compared to
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just
15%
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households
using two or more
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cars
.
However
, this
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figure
for the rest of
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period
for families had no
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car
fell
steadily
, hit a trough at around 27% which was
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just
a half of its
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figure
in the initial point. Meanwhile, the percentage of
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people
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who
had more than one
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car
experienced a remarkable fluctuation between 27% and 20% above till the
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end
of the period.

On the other hand
, the proportion of
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household
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who
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owned
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only
one
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car
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just
made up 35% of the total population then dropped
slightly
by 5% in the
next
decade.
However
, this
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figure
for families had one
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car
has surpassed other groups, ranking the
first
place since 1991 and finished the
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period
at around 43%
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IELTS academic the bar chart illustrates the proportion of households who owned cars in a specific European country over a three decade period from 1971 to 2001.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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