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Wind Turbine Design and process of electricity production

The illustrated diagram enumerates how a wind turbine can be placed in an appropriate location, also, it shows the process of generating electricity from wind. at the first glance we reveal that the amount of electricity on the procession to produce the renewable energy depends on the location of the wind turbine. It is lucid that a wind turbine have 4 parts include steel tower, generator, wind sensor and blades. Steel tower is a significant part of machine that it is very long and other things placed on it, generator right installed on there that the power of output is about 1. 5 megawatts, meanwhile, wind sensor which can recognize the speed and direction of wind is stayed on generator and in front of generator 3 specific blades located which material of them can fiberglass or wood, in addition, across a wind turbine there is camputure for controlling the mechanism of sensor into a generator. Wind turbine’s place is very important for amount of electricity in such a way Turbines can be located in the mountains or near the shore, however, the turbine placed in top of mountain will obtain the maximum of wind strength and in following another that stayed on near the coast generate medium electricity, also, the domestic turbine which near to controlling computer incept the less wind strength and produce the electricity about 100 kilowatts. As a consequence, the turbine with maximum wind strength beget the maximum amount of electricity.
The illustrated diagram enumerates how a
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be placed
in an appropriate location,
also
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the process of generating
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electricity
from
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wind
.
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at
the
first
glance we reveal that the amount of
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electricity
on the procession to produce the renewable energy depends on the location of the
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wind
turbine.

It is lucid that a
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wind
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turbine
have 4 parts include steel tower, generator,
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wind
sensor and blades. Steel tower is a significant part of machine that it is
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very
long and other things placed on it, generator right installed on there that the power of output is about 1. 5 megawatts, meanwhile,
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wind
sensor which can recognize the speed and direction of
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wind
is stayed
on generator and in front of generator 3 specific blades located which material of them can fiberglass or wood,
in addition
, across a
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wind
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there is
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for controlling the mechanism of sensor into a generator.

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place is
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very
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important
for amount of
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electricity
in such a way
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Turbines
can
be located
in the mountains or near the shore,
however
, the
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turbine
placed in top of mountain will obtain the maximum of
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wind
strength and in following another that stayed on near the coast generate medium
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electricity
,
also
, the domestic
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turbine
which near to controlling computer
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incept
the less
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strength and produce the
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electricity
about 100 kilowatts.

As a consequence, the
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turbine
with maximum
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strength beget the maximum amount of
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electricity
.
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IELTS academic Wind Turbine Design and process of electricity production

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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