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The two maps below show an island before an after the construction of some tourist facilities

The maps illustrate an island, before and after building some tourist facilites. It is clearly visible that counstruction of tourist facilities have lead to emerging needs of tourists and hence, counstrucing other tourism related structures. Dedicating a beach for swimming and a Pear for transport indicate more development owing to the fact of tourists presence. Not only the facilities have been developed, also routes and tracks have been considered for easy transitions between accomodation sites to restaurant for instance and viceversa. Eventhough, altering the wildlife and nature is an univetiable and adverse effect of tourism, palnts coverage in this island is as same as how it was before, as the overall tree numbers suggests. Number of the boats also demonstrated a higher sea traffic to and from the island in comparison to before tourist facilities had been counstructed. Despite of the terrific nature it seems to have, the island is equipped with all essential facilities for tourists such as accomodation, beach, reception and restaurant which can create a brilliant holiday for you.
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facilities have lead to emerging needs of
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counstrucing
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, as the
overall
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, beach, reception and restaurant which can create a brilliant holiday for you.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show an island before an after the construction of some tourist facilities

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