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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of an average house price, which was changed in five major cities between 1990 and 2002.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of an average house price, which was changed in five major cities between 1990 and 2002. O69p3
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of an average house price, which was changed in five major cities between 1990 and 2002. Overall, it is clear that almost all cities house prices decreased between 1990-1992. However, in the years 1996-2002 cities experienced significant increase in average house prices, especially London had dramatic increase at this period. In the period of decreasing of house prices in New York, Tokyo and London, while Madrid and Frankfurt house pricing were mere 2%. Tokyo and London were the lowest in average house pricing and with the same figures at approximately -7% in 1990-1995. However, New York showed with the proportion of in average house pricing with -5%. Changes between 1996 and 2002 in all cities were significant. New York average house pricing increased to 10% and reached to 5%. At this period London house pricing increased almost to 20%, which was dramatic increase in between 1990-2002.
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decreased between 1990-1992.
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experienced significant increase in
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London had dramatic increase at this period.

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in New York, Tokyo and London, while Madrid and Frankfurt
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were mere 2%. Tokyo and London were the lowest in
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and with the same figures at approximately -7% in 1990-1995.
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with the proportion of in
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with -5%.

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between 1996 and 2002 in all
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were significant. New York
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increased to 10% and reached to 5%. At this period London
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increased almost to 20%, which was dramatic increase in between 1990-2002.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the proportion of an average house price, which was changed in five major cities between 1990 and 2002.

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