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The diagrams below show the development of Headly village and Fonton in 1925, 1975 and today.

The diagrams below show the development of Headly village and Fonton in 1925, 1975 and today. Xy9Xg
The given maps illustrate the development of Headly village and Fonton from 1925 to 1975 and now. It is immediately obvious that the area of both Fonton and Headly Village are extended and integrated into a common area. Also, after merging together, the construction had been built up. On the map of 1925 and 1975, the different clearest detail point was that both Headly Village and Fonton were expanded. The road on the West was constructed into 2 roadside pavement, one side was built to the North, the other side was opened up to the East. The tunnel was erected, and also the Leisure center and the Local shop were set up near the intersection of the road. On the East of the map, there were not much changes, other than Fotton was developed and both the Railway track and the road was in the area In nowaday, the Headly village and Fotton are settled in one area, also the name “Headly Village” is renamed to “Headly Suburbs”. On the right-hand of the map, another railway is constructed, and towarded to the railway station on the center of the map. In both 2 ways nexto to the station is the Hotel and the Business Park are built. On the West of the map, the tunnel is extended, and the local shop is replaced by the Supermarket.
The
given
maps
illustrate the development of
Headly
village
and
Fonton
from 1925 to 1975 and
now
.

It is immediately obvious that the area of both
Fonton
and
Headly
Village
are extended
and integrated into a common area.
Also
, after merging together, the construction had
been built
up.

On the
map
of 1925 and 1975, the
different
clearest detail point was that both
Headly
Village
and
Fonton
were expanded
. The road on the West
was constructed
into 2 roadside
pavement
, one side
was built
to the North, the other side
was opened
up to the East. The tunnel
was erected
, and
also
the Leisure center and the Local shop
were set
up near the intersection of the road. On the East of the
map
, there were not
much
changes
, other than
Fotton
was developed
and both the Railway
track
and the road was in the area

In
nowaday
, the
Headly
village
and
Fotton
are settled
in one area,
also
the name “
Headly
Village”
is renamed
to “
Headly
Suburbs”. On the right-hand of the
map
, another railway
is constructed
, and
towarded
to the railway station
on the center
of the
map
. In both 2 ways
nexto
to the station is the Hotel and the Business Park
are built
. On the West of the
map
, the tunnel
is extended
, and the local shop
is replaced
by the Supermarket.
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