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The table illustrates the types of music albums buyers in Britain by different age groups.

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The table illustrates the types of music albums buyers in Britain by different age groups. It is clear that rock music was popular among young music lovers while classical music was the most popular among the middle age to elder age groups. In terms of rock music, the most spenders were among the young generation, age ranging from 12 to 35 years of old. Rock music buyers started to reduce from the age group of 38-45 and it reached the bottom for 50+ years of age. Turning back to pop and classical music, pop music remained in the middle for popularity for most of the age groups and classical music accounted for the lowest for young age, but it hold the mainstream type for middle to elder age. Pop music was responsible for more than 20% from age 12-45, but it dramatically fell down to 1% for 50+ years group. Classical music was less than 20% from age 12-35 years, and it started to rise from 38 years of age and reached 58%, which is the most on this table, for age 50+.
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In terms of rock
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, the most spenders were among the young generation,
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ranging from 12 to 35 years of
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group of 38-45 and it reached the bottom for 50+ years of age.

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classical
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, pop
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remained in the middle for popularity for most of the
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classical
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accounted for the lowest for young
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the mainstream type for middle to elder
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12-45,
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Classical
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12-35 years, and it
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and reached 58%, which is the most on this table, for
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50+.
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