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The bar chart depicts the percentage of English and Welsh families owning and renting accommodation over a 93-year period starting from 1918.

The bar chart depicts the percentage of English and Welsh families owning and renting accommodation over a 93-year period starting from 1918. 5a16Q
The bar chart depicts the percentage of English and Welsh families owning and renting accommodation over a 93-year period starting from 1918. It is clear that there was an upward trend in the ratio of households owning accommodation in 2 different countries whereas that of renting witnessed a contrasting movement over the given period. There was a similar rate in both the figures for owning and renting in the year 1971. As can be seen at the starting point of the period (1918), the proportion of families owning a home reached the bottom of approximately 20%, which was four times as low as the figure for renting, at around 80%. Besides, during the first half of the period, that of renting declined noticeably to exactly 50%, while there was a remarkable growth of the same figure in the rate of families owning their own home. Looking at the graph in more detail, over the following period of 40 years, the percentage of families owning homes saw a substantial increase from 50% to 65%. By contrasting, the same period continued experiencing a considerable drop in the figure for renting of 13%. In the year 2011, the rate of people having their own homes peaked at around 70%, but it was the opposite of the rent rate of 31%.
The bar chart depicts the percentage of English and Welsh
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accommodation over a
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93-year
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period
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that there was an upward trend in the ratio of households
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accommodation in 2
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witnessed a contrasting movement over the
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given
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period
. There was a similar
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rate
in both the
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figures
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owning
and
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renting
in the
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year
1971.

As can be
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seen
at the starting point of the
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period
(1918), the proportion of
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families
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owning
a home reached the bottom of approximately 20%, which was four times as low as the
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figure
for
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renting
, at around 80%.
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, during the
first
half of the
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period
, that of
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renting
declined
noticeably
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in the
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families
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their
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home.

Looking at the graph in more detail, over the following
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of 40 years, the percentage of
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families
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owning
homes
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saw
a substantial increase from 50% to 65%. By contrasting, the same
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period
continued experiencing a considerable drop in the
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figure
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renting
of 13%. In the
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2011, the
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homes peaked at around 70%,
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it was the opposite of the rent
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rate
of 31%.
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