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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money given to the charity by Britishers of different age groups for the year 1990 and 2010.

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of money given to the charity by Britishers of different age groups for the year 1990 and 2010. Overall, the contribution in the 1990 was higher than that of 2010. The people at 36-50 age had donated the most in 1990, while the least was given by 18-25 age in 2010. In 1990, the share of proportions was highest for 36-50 age category which stood about 42%, while the lowest is with 18-25 around 17%. By 2010, these figures had fallen significantly to 35% and 7% respectively. The rate of donors among the people aged 26 to 35 also decreased from 31% in 1990 to 24% in 2010. While, for 18-50 age people it followed an decline trend between 1990 and 2010, but the trend suddenly changed in opposite direction for older Britishers. For the people who are 51-65 years old there was a rose by 4% to made nearly 40%, which was the highest in year 2010. The figure for aged people like >65 was just slightly greater than 1990.

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