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survey of adult education, double diagram

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Two graphs beneath, demonstrate the result of survey related to the grown-up education. The bar chart, depicts the purpose of study for adults. On the other hand, the pie diagram illustrates the opinion of people on how the payment should be shared. Overall, we can see that the most popular purpose of education due to their passion on subjects whereas the least reason for learning is to meet other ones. Regarding to the graph gaining qualification has a second place on learning purpose. Also, for some of them persuade further education is just about promotion or finding better job. On the one hand we have the reasons on learning, on the other hand we have 3 categories which should be paid the cost. Well over a third people opine that the cost of their further knowledge should be paid by themselves, whereas just over a third of them believes that the cost should be shared by their employers. However, we can see exactly a quarter of them think that the taxpayers should pay the cost.

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