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Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne

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The map illustrates the Tarnagul town development which is located near Melbourne. On the one hand, in 1900 dairy was located near the road and left side of the river. On the right hand side of the river there were three main things. Firstly, on the top corner one large orange farm and bottom side was mandarins. Townarea was in middle of the area. With regard to the year 1950, dairy was replaced with lemon trees and mandarins replaced with orange trees. On the right side government made one railway track along with some empty shops. On the other hand, in 2000 Tarnagual town fully developed with large amount of amenities. Most of the sites demolished and replaced with new things. Firstly, lemon trees converted into sanctuary. Apart from that, oranges farms land unused in 2000. Secondly, one big park constructed bottom of the road and railway track has demoloshed. Overall, in 1900 town was not fully developed while in 2000 it become fully modern.
The map illustrates the
Tarnagul
town development which
is located
near Melbourne.

On the one hand, in 1900 dairy
was located
near the road and
left
side of the river. On the
right hand
side of the river there were three main things.
Firstly
, on the top corner one large orange farm and bottom side was mandarins.
Townarea
was in middle of the area. With regard to the year 1950, dairy
was replaced
with lemon trees and mandarins replaced with orange trees. On the right side
government
made one railway
track
along with
some
empty shops.

On the other hand
, in 2000
Tarnagual
town
fully
developed with large amount of amenities. Most of the sites demolished and replaced with new things.
Firstly
, lemon trees converted into sanctuary. Apart from that, oranges farms land unused in 2000.
Secondly
, one
big
park constructed bottom of the road and railway
track
has
demoloshed
.

Overall
, in 1900 town was not
fully
developed while in 2000 it
become
fully
modern.
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IELTS academic Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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