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The maps illustrate significant alterations that take place in an office block between the present and the future.

The maps illustrate significant alterations that take place in an office block between the present and the future. rar8n

The maps illustrate significant alterations that take place in an office block between the present and the future. Overall, it is clear that the office block will undergo a substantial transformation with the replacement of the two grasslands for some facilities and some areas. The Entrance which is located on the bottom right corner at present will be relocated to the middle of the building in the future. The four small Offices near the Entrance will be converted into two larger rooms, sitting on either side of the Entrance. On the left side of the map, a Grassland will be replaced by the Outdoor Seating area. Similarly, a Grassland on the right side will be demolished to make way for the Coffee Machine and the Meeting area. The two Workplaces on the top of the map will be constructed at the place where The Kitchen and the Canteen are. Besides, the Storeroom on the right hand of the Canteen will remain unchanged in size and position. Finally, the Water Closets next to the Storeroom will be moved to the top right corner of the building and near the Coffee Machine.

The maps illustrate significant alterations that take place in an office block between the present and the future.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the office block will undergo a substantial transformation with the replacement of the two grasslands for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 facilities and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 areas.

The Entrance which is located
 on the bottom You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 corner at present will be relocated
 to the middle of the building in the future. The four This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 Offices near the Entrance will be converted
 into two larger rooms, sitting on either side of the Entrance. On the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the map, a Grassland will be replaced
 by the Outdoor Seating area. Similarly
, a Grassland on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 side will be demolished
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for the Coffee Machine and the Meeting area.

The two Workplaces on the top of the map will be constructed
 at the place where The Kitchen and the Canteen are. Besides
, the Storeroom on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 hand of the Canteen will remain A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.unchanged
unchanged in size
 and position. Finally
, the Water Closets next
 to the Storeroom will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the top You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 corner of the building and near the Coffee Machine. 