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The bar chart illustrate the information about business graduates and engineering graduates what work doing after graduation. The data has been given in the percentage.

The bar chart illustrate the information about business graduates and engineering graduates what work doing after graduation. The data has been given in the percentage. p1DE3

Overall, it can be vividly manifested that the highest number of worked done by both categories. Whereas, the lowest trend followed by seeking work. In details, in the first year 60% employment work completed by trade graduates, while minor increase observed in second year which was approximately 68%. Apart from this, 30% further study continued by business graduates in both years, whilst nearly 10% education done by timeout in two years then, a dramatic went down noticed in seeking work which was 7%. Moving to the rest of the data, similar worker work continued by engineering graduates which was closely 75% in the first and second years. Moving ahead, in the first year nearly 11% further study done by engineering graduates and, it was decline 2% in both year. At the end of two years approximately 8% to 10% seeking work done by engendering graduates.

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work
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