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Development of the village od Ryemouth between 1995 to present.

Development of the village od Ryemouth between 1995 to present. yDbQM
The two maps illustrate the development between 1995 to present in the village of Ryemouth. It is pretty evident that the farmland and forest pakr which were located north-east side have been replaced by the golf ground and tennis court center. In present, another changes in compare to 1995 is housing which located in north-west. In 1995, there were only twelve houses but it have been increased and now it is sixteen. It is quite apparent that in 1995, the shops which were located opposite side of fish market have been replaced by the restaurant and also, the fish market has been replaced by the appartments. In 1995, it is clearly showed that the fishing port behind the fish market, but it has been demolished with the fish market. There is another changes in present, it is the car parking which has been built next to the hotel but in 1995, it has not been built. Now, the only thing remained same from 1995 to till date is cafe which is located side of the main road in south-east.
The two maps illustrate the development between 1995 to present in the village of
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Ryemouth
. It is pretty evident that the farmland and forest
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pakr
which were
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located
north-east side have
been replaced
by the golf ground and tennis court center. In present, another
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changes
in compare to 1995 is housing which
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located
in north-west. In 1995, there were
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only
twelve
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houses
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but
it
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have
been increased
and
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now
it is sixteen. It is quite apparent that in 1995, the shops which were
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located
opposite side of fish
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market
have
been replaced
by the restaurant and
also
, the fish
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market
has
been replaced
by the
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appartments
. In 1995, it is
clearly
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showed
that the fishing port behind the fish
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market
,
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but
it has
been demolished
with the fish
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market
. There is another
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changes
in present, it is the car parking which has
been built
next
to the hotel
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but
in 1995, it has not
been built
.
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Now
, the
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only
thing remained same from 1995 to till date is
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cafe
which is
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located
side of the main road in south-east.
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IELTS academic Development of the village od Ryemouth between 1995 to present.

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