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goods transported in UK (1974-2002)

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The line graph illustrates the number of goods transported through four public transportations, including road, water, rail, pipeline in the UK in the period from 194 to 2002. Overall, four public systems experienced fluctuation over time, despite that road always surpassed others in the quantity of delivered commodities. For instant, road witnessed ups and downs in between 70 and nearly 80milion tons in the first 20 years, followed by a jump to about 100 million tons in the last year, By contrast, the least amount of goods was transported via pipeline when it experienced a marginal growth from approximately 1 to 2 million tons in the first four years ensued by a gradual climb to exactly 21 million tons till 1994 and plateau at 22 million tons in 2002. Meanwhile, the amount of goods carried by waterways and railway remained the same at around 40 million tons in the first four years and then railway began to see fluctuations between 30 and 40 million tons during the final years while waterway increase to 55 million tons at the end of 1982. Its figure the stabilized at 60 million till 1994, despite a surge to nearly 70 million in the last year. Interesting point, the biggest gap was seen in 1998 when road almost quadrupled pipeline in the quantity of delivered goods.
The line graph illustrates the number of
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transported through four public transportations, including
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road
, water, rail, pipeline in the UK in the period from 194 to 2002.

Overall
, four public systems experienced fluctuation over time, despite that
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road
always surpassed others in the quantity of delivered commodities.

For instant,
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witnessed ups and downs in between 70 and
nearly
80milion tons in the
first
20 years, followed by a jump to about 100
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million
tons in the last
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year
, By contrast, the least amount of
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goods
was transported
via pipeline when it experienced a marginal growth from approximately 1 to 2
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million
tons in the
first
four years ensued by a gradual climb to exactly 21
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million
tons till 1994 and plateau at 22
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million
tons in 2002. Meanwhile, the amount of
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goods
carried by waterways and railway remained the same at around 40
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million
tons in the
first
four years and then railway began to
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fluctuations between 30 and 40
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million
tons during the final years while waterway increase to 55
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million
tons at the
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end
of 1982. Its figure the stabilized at 60
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million
till 1994, despite a surge to
nearly
70
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million
in the last year.

Interesting point, the biggest gap was
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seen
in 1998 when
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almost quadrupled pipeline in the quantity of delivered
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goods
.
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IELTS academic goods transported in UK (1974-2002)

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