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Different kinds of digital games

Different kinds of digital games 6Lk9K

The chart shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from the year 2000 to 2006. As we can make up from this chart mobile games and online games were basically non existent in the year 2000, due to the still developing internet, which was still out of hands to use for the average costumer because of the technology behind it being still expensive. However, in the following years the internet gets its space to rise and becomes popular as it becomes cheaper for households to buy computers. Another fact which we can derive out of this chart is the fact that console games became less popular, the rising popularity of mobile devices like nintendo's and smartphone's can explain this decrease. In conclusion, the rise of the internet shook the world of gaming by making portable devices more popular and introducing online games.

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