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Female unemployment rates in the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014

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The bar chart shows the unemployment rates among women in the countries that make up the United Kingdom, both in 2013 and in 2014. There has generally been a small decrease in female unemployment rates from 2013 to 2014, except in Scotland. In 2013, 5. 6% of women in Northern Ireland were unemployed. The only country with a smaller percentage of women unemployed was Wales, with a rate of 5. 4%. Both countries saw a decrease in the percentage of unemployed women in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the percentage fell to 4. 6% and in Wales it fell to 5%. England had the greatest percentage of unemployed women in 2013, with 6. 8%. However, this decreased by 0. 3% in 2014. Lastly, Scotland was the only country which had an increasing percentage of unemployed women. In 2013, it had 6. 1% of women out of work. This increased to 6. 7% in 2014, making it the country with the highest female unemployment rate of the four countries.
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IELTS academic Female unemployment rates in the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014

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