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The line graph presents data on how many students of Vietnam were educated in three different countries from 2000 to 2015.

The line graph presents data on how many students of Vietnam were educated in three different countries from 2000 to 2015. 9BmyW

The line graph presents data on how many students of Vietnam were educated in three different countries from 2000 to 2015. Overall, the average number of students in America and France increased considerably, whereas the opposite true for Russia. In 2000, there were nearly 3. 5 million Vietnamese students in France. Then it had noted a marginal drop to 2. 5 million by 2005, and stayed constant between 2005 and 2010. After staying at 2. 5 million the data followed an upward trend and picked to 4. 5 million. Moving to America, it also followed a similar pattern. The former amount of Vietnamese students in America was 1. 5 million in 2000. Unlike to France, the pattern for America did not remain steady over a period of 15 years. The numerical superiority was even more conspicious in 2015; after peaking at exactly 5 million. By contrast, it is clear that the figure for Russia dropped slightly. It had started with 3 million and declined to nearly 2 million by 2010. Despite of increasing between 2010 and 2015, the general trend for Russia was downward.

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