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The bar chart gives information about drinking rates as well as buying drinking products among five Australian cities.

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The bar chart gives information about drinking rates as well as buying drinking products among five Australian cities. Overall, almost among all cities residents went to a cafe for tea or coffee since 4 weeks, its index is the most common. To begin with Sydey and Melbourne's citizens bought fresh coffee index is almost no difference whereas other cities index are less than Sydney and Melbourne. It means, minority part of other cities residents bought pure coffee. Then, Brisbane and Hobart population purchased coffee instantly during the last four weeks. And Sydney's 45%people bought coffee rapidly. Adelaide and Melbourne's nearly 50 percent citizens purchased coffee immediately. According to the last category, approximately sixty-four percent Melbourne and Hobart's residents drank coffee or tea from cafe in last weeks. Coffee or tea was drunk by 61% Sydney's citizens, 55% Brisbane's population and 50% Adelaide's residents during the four weeks.
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IELTS academic The bar chart gives information about drinking rates as well as buying drinking products among five Australian cities.

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