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the graph shows the private debt and credit in the UK since 1880.Summarise with main features and make comparisons wherever necessary.

the graph shows the private debt and credit in the UK since 1880. Summarise with main features and make comparisons wherever necessary. ndwaK
The given graph illustrates the information on the private dept and credit in UK over a period of years Overall, the British debits has the significant rose over the period whereas the credits has a minority percentage and remains fluctuating throughout the period, In terms of debts, it started with exactly 60% in 1880 and remains at same proportion till 1910. loans dropped by approximately 30% from 1910 to 1920 and then it significantly increased to 70% between 1930 and 1940. after 1940 debt market saw it lowest, came down to 30%. On the other side asset started with zero percentage in starting year and it remains stable till 1910. It saw it lowest decline of 10% from 1910 and again increased to 10% after 10 years, after 1920 again it dropped to -10% and it slightly maintained ups and downs until 1990 where it reached to it maximum proportion to 20%, again on 2010 it saw 0 % and went to 10% on 2020
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graph illustrates the information on the private dept and credit in UK over a period of years

Overall
, the British debits has the significant rose over the period whereas the credits has a minority percentage and remains fluctuating throughout the period,

In terms of debts, it
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started
with exactly 60% in 1880 and remains at same proportion till 1910.
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loans
dropped by approximately 30% from 1910 to 1920 and then it
significantly
increased to 70% between 1930 and 1940.
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after
1940 debt market
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it lowest, came down to 30%.

On the other side asset
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started
with zero percentage in starting year and it remains stable till 1910. It
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saw
it
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lowest
decline of 10% from 1910 and again increased to 10% after 10 years, after 1920 again it dropped to -10% and it
slightly
maintained ups and downs until 1990 where it reached to it maximum proportion to 20%, again on 2010 it
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saw
0 % and went to 10% on 2020
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