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The proportion of British adults groups use the internet

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The table illustrates the proportion of British adults groups who use the internet changed from October 2000 to October 2005. Overall, it is clear from the date that other three age groups has increased use internet, expected 16 to 24 year olds had not been reached a quarter in the past five years. Look at the data more detail, we can see that the most dramatic rose has been for 16 to 24 year olds, it increasing one fourth from October 2000 to October 2004. However, the age groups of 25 to 44 the figure had risen to 12% above to the other three age groups between October 2001 to 2002. On the other hand, 16 to 24 year olds has greatest internet usage but since 2002 lessed young adults used internet, there is predicted to be a decreased by 3%, reaching 87% by October 2005. Finally, all the age groups has seen steady used internet since October 2002, apart from age group of 16 to 24, the table shown the biggest potential age group was 45 to 54 year olds. It had been almost approached two fourth in the past five years.
The table illustrates the proportion of British adults
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that the most dramatic rose has been for 16 to 24
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one fourth from October 2000 to October 2004.
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of 25 to 44 the figure had risen to 12% above to the other three
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between October 2001 to 2002.
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