Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Rating what feature is important in a car

Rating what feature is important in a car pXw89
The bar chart compares my personal ratings of six car features with the rating of the whole class. The most interesting point is that the most important feature when me and my class buying a car is the airbag. Meanwhile, the least important feature when buying a car is the sun roof, according to the whole class rank and my-self. Looking at the graph, we all agree that airbag is the most important feature when choosing a car. Surprisingly, I rated colour as the second most significant feature when buying a vehicle and the class did, too. However, air conditioning is the third most necessary feature when my class buys a car, whereas, I rated this as the most major. On the other hand, sunroof is the least prominent feature when the whole class selects a vehicle, not except me. Nonetheless, I considered that alarm is the second greatest feature when picking a car, whereas the class rated this as less important. Predictably, the class rated stereo system is the least significant feature when choosing a car, I did it, too.
The bar chart compares my personal ratings of six
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
features with the rating of the whole
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.

The most interesting point is that the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feature
when me and my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
buying a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
is the airbag. Meanwhile, the least
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feature
when buying a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
is the sun roof, according to the whole
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
rank and my-self.

Looking at the graph, we all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that airbag is the most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feature
when choosing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
.
Surprisingly
, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rated
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
as the second most significant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feature
when buying a vehicle and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
did, too.
However
, air conditioning is the third most necessary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feature
when my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buys
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
, whereas, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rated
this as the most major.

On the other hand
, sunroof is the least prominent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feature
when the whole
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
selects a vehicle, not except me. Nonetheless, I considered that alarm is the second greatest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feature
when picking a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
, whereas the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rated
this as less
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
important
.
Predictably
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rated
stereo system is the least significant
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
feature
when choosing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
, I did it, too.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic Rating what feature is important in a car

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6.5band
    The diagram shows two maps of an island that has been rebuilt to facilitate visitors
    The diagram shows two maps of an island that has been rebuilt to facilitate visitors. Overall, the infrastructure of this place is fully changed, over the period; a number of accommodations has been built on the island, as well as a pier around the sea, while eastern part is left without any changes...
  • 6.5band
    Graph about energy consumption
    Given is the line graph providing us with information regarding the United State, usage of energy from 1980 predicted up to 2030. Overall, it is starkly apparent that the consumption of energy showing an upward trend, markedly in petroleum including oil. A closer look, utilizing fossil fuels as pe...
  • 7band
    Chart graph of energy usage
    Given is the line graph providing us with information regarding the United State, usage of energy from 1980 predicted up to 2030. Overall, it is starkly apparent that the consumption of energy showing an upward trend, markedly in petroleum including oil. A closer look, utilizing fossil fuels as pe...
  • 6band
    The two charts below outline the statistically desirable countries in terms of quality of life and reasons for migration.
    The pie chart illustrates the main motivations for migration and the bar chart gives information about the rankings of different coutries based on the quality of life index in 2014. Overall, job related factors played the most important role in people relocating to another country. In addition, Swe...
  • 7band
    two maps show sunny island before and after commercialisation,
    The given map reveals the dramatic changes in a small island that had been developed to add a number of facilities, especially for the visiting tourists Overall, with the construction of different types of facilities, the island has been transformed into a tourist attraction where people can stay, ...
  • 5band
    The diagram shows the steps procedure involved in production of cement and concrete.
    The picture depicts the step by step involved in production of cement and concrete. In detailed view, limestone and clay crushed in the crusher to obtain the powder. After that, powder is put into the mixer and mixer is heated by rotating heater and external heat provide to absorb the moisture. In t...