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the bar chart describes the rate of interest exhibited by tourists to visit the three museums located in London for a 6 year period, starting from the year 2007 to 2012.

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the bar chart describes the rate of interest exhibited by tourists to visit the three museums located in London for a 6 year period, starting from the year 2007 to 2012. Overall, a huge number of people got attracted to visit National Gallery museum and British museum ranked least having less number of tourists for two consecutive years in the overall period of 6 years. Victoria & Albert museum has around a 13million visitors in the years 2007, 2008. Later, as time passes there were fluctuations that took place every year and finally in the year 2012 there were 10million visitors. British Museum was the 2nd most popular museum in the year 2007 by having around 13 million visitors. Though this museum experienced a wide range of interests of visitors, it maintained to be in the second position till the end with 14 million visitors approximately. National Gallery was the only museum that always thrived to attract its tourists each year, where it had only 7million members in the year 2007 and became popular with every year and finally got 20million visitors in the year 2012 2021 © IELTSing.
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the rate of interest exhibited by tourists to visit the three
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museums
located in London for a 6
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year
period, starting from the
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2007 to 2012.

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people
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attracted to visit National Gallery
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and British
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ranked least having less number of tourists for two consecutive years in the
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period of 6 years.

Victoria & Albert
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has around a
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13million
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visitors
in the years 2007, 2008. Later, as time passes there were fluctuations that took place every
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year
and
finally
in the
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2012 there were
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10million
visitors.

British
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Museum
was the 2nd most popular
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museum
in the
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2007 by having around 13
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million
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visitors
. Though this
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museum
experienced a wide range of interests of
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, it maintained to be in the second position till the
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with 14
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million
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National Gallery was the
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that always thrived to attract its tourists each
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, where it had
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7million
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2007 and became popular with every
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2012

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IELTS academic the bar chart describes the rate of interest exhibited by tourists to visit the three museums located in London for a 6 year period, starting from the year 2007 to 2012.

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