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report about proportion of 8 various of the economy branch in turkey in 2000 and 2016.

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The two pie charts give report about proportion of 8 various of the economy branch in turkey in 2000 and 2016. Overall, in both years, the part of healthcare and education did not change, the slice of agriculture had consisted almost a quarter in a given first year, the construction of economy was the least proportion on the contrary it showed a significant surge in the final year. The segment of agriculture was the biggest proportion in 2000 while during 16 years it fell substantially from 24% to 14% this is the highest modification among barnches, two of the highest proportions exactly Government, Leisure and Hospitality had dropped from 12% to 9% and 17% to 14% respectively. Regarding to Construction of economy increased noticeably from 3% to 10%, it is equal to almost one tenth of values, in contrast to 2016 year's proportions, Manufacturing, Finance, Bussines and other displayed rising between 8% and 12%, 5% and8% corrwspondingly, the least growth was Trade, Utilities and Transportation, it went up to 2%(exactly from 14% to 16%).

The two pie charts give report about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbulkscaleratiocapacityshareportion
proportion
 of 8 various of the economy branch in Did you mean the country "Turkey" (which needs to be capitalized)?Turkey
turkey
 in 2000 and 2016.

Overall
, in both years, the part of healthcare and education did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
, the slice of agriculture had consisted almost a quarter in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
first
 year, the construction of economy was the least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbulkscaleratiocapacityshareportion
proportion
on the contrary
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 a significant surge in the final year.

The segment of agriculture was the biggest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbulkscaleratiocapacityshareportion
proportion
 in 2000 while during 16 years it fell substantially
 from 24% to 14% this is the highest modification among Possible spelling mistake found.branches
barnches
, two of the highest proportions exactly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
, Leisure and Hospitality had dropped from 12% to 9% and 17% to 14% respectively
.

The phrase 'Regarding to' is not correct. Use "Regarding" or "regard to".RegardingRegard to
Regarding to
 Construction of economy increased noticeably
 from 3% to 10%, it is equal to almost one tenth of values, in contrast
 to 2016 year's proportions, Manufacturing, Finance, Possible spelling mistake found.Bus sines
Bussines
 and other displayed rising between 8% and 12%, 5% and8% Possible spelling mistake found.correspondingly
corrwspondingly
, the least growth was Trade, Utilities and Transportation, it went up to 2%(exactly from 14% to 16%). 