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Summarize information from the maps.

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The two diagrams illustrate a number of changes in Sholeaton between two various years, 1965 and 2015. It can be seen from the maps that the city has been improved a lot and is able to provide his citizen more to 2015. In 1985, there was a small park that was extended to the east to 2015. The swimming pool, which had been next to the park was demolished and a library was built instead. Furthermore, the cafe, which had been south of the park, was replaced by a fountain. Earlier a place, where is a fountain, was surrounded by shops from North and West, but restaurants were built in 2015 and now the fountain is surrounded on the East and South by them. By 2015, the shopping centre was extended to the South and eight new houses were built along with it. Further, was built a pedestrian crossing, which leads from houses across a road to Cycle Lane. For easy of use bicycle park and bus station were moved closer to the car park. In terms of business, the business centre was built in 2015, in a place where was a library.
The two diagrams illustrate a number of
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changes
in
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Sholeaton
between two various years, 1965 and 2015. It can be
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seen
from the maps that the city has been
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improved
a lot and is able to provide his citizen more to 2015.

In 1985, there was a
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small
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park
that
was extended
to the east to 2015. The swimming pool, which had been
next
to the
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park
was demolished
and a library
was built
instead
.
Furthermore
, the
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cafe
, which had been south of the
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park
,
was replaced
by a fountain. Earlier a place, where is a fountain,
was surrounded
by shops from North and West,
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but
restaurants
were built
in 2015 and
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now
the fountain
is surrounded
on the East and South by them.

By 2015, the shopping
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centre
was extended
to the South and eight new
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houses
were built
along with it.
Further
,
was built
a pedestrian crossing, which leads from
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houses
across a road to Cycle Lane. For easy of
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use
bicycle
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park
and bus station were
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moved
closer to the car
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park
. In terms of business, the business
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centre
was built
in 2015, in a place where was a library.

IELTS academic Summarize information from the maps.

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