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The bar chart describes the data of households with cars in European country during 30 years (1971 to 2001).

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The bar chart describes the data of households with cars in European country during 30 years (1971 to 2001). In 1971, nearly 50 percentage people had no car. It can be seen that after 10 years, it was decreasing level around 10% and then it was continues of falling in between 1991 to 2001 with the same percentages. On the other hand, during 1971 approximately 35 % of people had a single car. it was increased with around 10 percentage and reached 45 %. But, it was slightly fall in 1991. In 2001 the number of single car owners was dramatically increased with around 15%. The percentage of more than 2 cars households were 25% in 1971 and it was reached 35% in 1981. After that, at 1991 numbers were slightly fall. In 2001 the it was reached 40 %. Overall, it can be seen that, percentage of no car were fall in every year, however, 1 car and more than 2 cars households numbers were rose in 2001.
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in European country during 30 years (1971 to 2001).

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people
had no
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. It can be
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that after 10 years, it was decreasing level around 10% and then it was continues of falling in
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between 1991 to 2001
with the same percentages.

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had a single
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and reached 45 %.
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in 1991. In 2001 the number of single
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owners was
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The
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of more than 2
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cars
households were 25% in 1971 and it
was reached
35% in 1981. After that, at 1991 numbers were
slightly
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. In 2001
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, 1
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and more than 2
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households numbers were rose in 2001.
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