Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The bar chart depicts temperatures and precipitation of everyday

The bar chart depicts temperatures and precipitation of everyday jdEeX
The bar chart depicts average between the temperature and precipitation of every month in kolkata. It is obviously showed that, in the month of may it is on its peak whereas in december it slightly slope down. A good example of this situation kolkata is based near by the coastal side because of this rainfall chances most probably in the mid of year. Furthermore, from july to august temperature is too hot and also humid in weather. However, in the month of november, december, and january it seems to be like sharply normal but cold also. Chances of rainfall is less but the temperature is too frosty just less than 4 degree. In april and may, Temperature is moderate around 10 degree. Even so, in june temperature is too blazing hot 25 degree approximately. Also, in the month of october approximately half of june's temperature. To sum up, In every month weather changes accordig to different kinds of seasons in kolkata. Thoroughly, in monsoon rainfall chances are rose sharply high and also in winter degree of temperature is very less.
The bar chart depicts average between the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperature
and precipitation of every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
kolkata
.

It is
obviously
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
that, in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
of may it is on its peak whereas in
Possible spelling mistake found.
december
it
slightly
Did you mean "slopes"?
slope
down. A
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
example of this situation
Possible spelling mistake found.
kolkata
is based
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
the coastal side
because of this
rainfall chances most
probably
in the mid of year.

Furthermore
, from
Possible spelling mistake found.
july
to
The month "August" needs to be capitalized.
august
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperature
is too hot and
also
humid in weather.
However
, in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
november
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
december
, and
Possible spelling mistake found.
january
it seems to be like
sharply
normal
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
also
. Chances of rainfall is less
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperature
is too frosty
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
less than 4
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
. In
Possible spelling mistake found.
april
and may,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Temperature
is moderate around 10
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
. Even
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, in
Possible spelling mistake found.
june
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperature
is too blazing hot 25
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
approximately.
Also
, in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
october
approximately half of
Possible spelling mistake found.
june
's temperature.

To sum up, In every
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
month
weather
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
Possible spelling mistake found.
accordig
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
kinds of seasons in
Possible spelling mistake found.
kolkata
.
Thoroughly
, in monsoon rainfall chances are rose
sharply
high and
also
in winter
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
temperature
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
less.

IELTS academic The bar chart depicts temperatures and precipitation of everyday

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The bar chart depicts temperatures and precipitation of everyday