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The bar chart demonstrates the number of Britons in Liverpool, London and Manchester who were surveyed about their surveyed in terms of their housing preferences during the year of 2009.

The bar chart demonstrates the number of Britons in Liverpool, London and Manchester who were surveyed about their surveyed in terms of their housing preferences during the year of 2009. kWOo2
In general, what stands out from the bar chart is that almost all inhabitants in Liverpool prefer to live in apartments, while Londoners stay in semi-detached houses and for Manchester citizens preferences there are two similar figures are detached houses and semi-detached houses. As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of people choosing apartments in Liverpool stays in the highest position about 60% which is 2 times higher than London and 3 times higher than Manchester. Terraced houses are the least common in all three cities. Terraced houses are the most popular in London at around 20% which is twice as high as the other two cities.
In general
, what stands out from the bar chart is that almost all inhabitants in Liverpool prefer to
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in apartments, while Londoners stay in semi-detached
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and for Manchester citizens preferences there are two similar figures
are detached
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houses
and semi-detached
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. As can be
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from the chart, the percentage of
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choosing apartments in Liverpool stays in the highest position about 60% which is 2 times higher than London and 3 times higher than Manchester. Terraced
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are the least common in all three cities. Terraced
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are the most popular in London at around 20% which is twice as high as the other two cities.
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IELTS academic The bar chart demonstrates the number of Britons in Liverpool, London and Manchester who were surveyed about their surveyed in terms of their housing preferences during the year of 2009.

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