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The pie chart illustrates how a children's charity in the USA allocates its finances in one year. Overall, the revenue of 53, 561, 580$ is generated by the school, and 53, 224, 896$ is spent each year. The biggest source of contribution is donated food. On the other hand, Program services are the main reason for these expenses. To start off, if we take a look at the chart on the left which shows revenue sources. Donated food is the largest source of donation with 86. 6% of the overall sources. Community contributions are 10. 4% and program revenue is 2. 2% they stand at second and third place respectively.
The pie chart illustrates how a children's charity in the USA allocates its finances in one year.

Overall
, the revenue of 53, 561,
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580$
is generated
by the school, and 53, 224,
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$896".
896$
is spent
each year. The biggest
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source
of contribution
is donated
food.
On the other hand
, Program services are the main reason for these expenses.

To
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off, if we take a look at the chart on the
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which
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revenue
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. Donated food is the largest
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source
of donation with 86. 6% of the
overall
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sources
. Community contributions are 10. 4% and program revenue is 2. 2% they stand at second and third place
respectively
.
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IELTS academic money spent in a year by a perticular school

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