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average carbon di oxide emissions per person in four different European countries

average carbon di oxide emissions per person in four different European countries PRD8d

The graph illustrates the amount of average carbon di oxide emissions per person in four different European countries during the period between 1967 and 2007. Overall, United Kingdom’s average Co2 emission was high throughout the period between 1967 to 2007. While Portugal and Sweden shared the lowest at the end of the study period in 2007. Initially, United Kingdom’s Co2 emission was 10. 8 metric tons I 1967. Then it was gradually decreased to 8. 5 metric tons in 2007. But Sweden’s emission rapidly increased from 8. 4 metric tons in 1967 to 10. 2 metric tons in 1977. Thereafter it went down to 7mt in 1987 and then slowly decreased to 5. 4mt in 2007. Furthermore, Italy and Portugal’s co2 emission started with 4. 2 metric tons and 1. 2 metric tons respectively in 1967. Both gradually increased throughout the study period and the former ended up at 7. 8 metric tons while the latter finished at 5. 4 metric tons in 2007

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Initially
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emission
 was 10. 8 metric tons I 1967. Then it was gradually
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emission
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 it went down to 7mt in 1987 and then slowly
 decreased to 5. 4mt in 2007.

Furthermore
, Italy and Portugal’s co2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdischargeradiation
emission
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started
 with 4. 2 metric tons and 1. 2 metric tons respectively
 in 1967. Both gradually
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period
 and the former ended up at 7. 8 metric tons while the latter finished at 5. 4 metric tons in 2007