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the pie charts below show profession chosen by female graduates of a certain university.

the pie charts below show profession chosen by female graduates of a certain university. GNlww

The pie chart below depicts the percentage of female graduate occupation opted from the certain university. Overall, it can be seen that, there was vast difference in the education field into the given period of time. In engineering, there was least difference in the both the years. In 1990, education is accounted by the female graduates was 40% which was the highest occupation in demand. The second highest profession is arts which was 25%. Followed by the medical, management and engineering which were 20%, 10% and 5% respectively. The occupation opted by the female graduates equally was education and medical which were 25%. Management was accounted by 20%. Engineering and arts were same which was 15%. Comparing the both year, education was the most popular occupation opted by the female which was 40%, was decreased by 15% in year of 2015. Medical and arts in both the year were had minor changes. Management was increased in 2015 by 10% in contrast to 1990.

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