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The bar chart compares the important level of six car’s features.

The bar chart compares the important level of six car’s features. 9a3K0
The bar chart compares Minh’s own ratings with the overall class’s ratings about the important level of six car’s features. In a general view, it is crystal clear that both Minh and the class find that the airbag is the most important part of the car. Meanwhile, the sunroof plays the least essential role for the class, and the alarm is the least important for Minh when buying a car. First, the airbag is the most valued for Minh and the class with a rating of one. Then, the class rates two for colour and three for air conditioning. Whereas, for Minh, the evaluation of colour and air conditioning was five and two accordingly. Therefore, colour and air conditioning play the second-most and the third-most important respectively for the class. Besides, Minh finds that air conditioning plays the second-most essential role while color is only at the fourth place in the chart. On another aspect, Minh finds the sunroof and the class finds that the alarm is the least significant part of the car when buying one, and both of them are rated six. The stereo system is rated five by the class and just only one higher than by Minh. Also, the sunroof and alarm are rated three and four by Minh and the class respectively.
The bar chart compares
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’s
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own
ratings with the
overall
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class
’s ratings about the
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important
level of six car’s features.

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clear
that both
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Minh
and the
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find
that the airbag is the most
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important
part of the car. Meanwhile, the sunroof plays the least essential role for the
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class
, and the alarm is the least
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important
for
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Minh
when buying a car.

First
, the airbag is the most valued for
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Minh
and the
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class
with a rating of one. Then, the
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rates two for
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colour
and three for
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air
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conditioning
. Whereas, for
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Minh
, the evaluation of
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colour
and
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air
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conditioning
was five and two
accordingly
.
Therefore
,
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colour
and
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air
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play the second-most and the third-most
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important
respectively
for the
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.
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,
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that
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air
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conditioning
plays the second-most essential role while color is
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at the fourth place in the chart.

On another aspect,
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Minh
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the sunroof and the
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that the alarm is the least significant part of the car when buying one, and both of them
are rated
six. The stereo system
is rated
five by the
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one higher than by
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.
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