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describe the pie chart showing budget of UAE in year 2000

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The pie graph displays spendings of UAE government in the year 2000 with a total 315 billion AED budget. Overall, the biggest part of the chart shows the amount of money spent on social secutiry and the smallest part is for transportation. There are several other factors such as law and order, education, employment in industry and farming, defence, taking care of the envirinment and housing herritage, aslo debt interests and some other costs that make half of the chart. Health and social services per person could also be counted as a large part of the pie chart. Social and security is the part with the highest spending which is a cost of 100 billion in a year. The socond most spending is for health and social services needs that costs about 53 billion per year. Also, the third and fourth ones could be refferred to learning systems and other payments with costs of 38 and 23 billion. The lowest spending is 9 billions for transporting and 13 billion for industry and agriculture employment. The cost of housing herritage and habitant is also low and about 15 billion.
The pie graph displays
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spendings
of UAE
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government
in the year 2000 with a total 315
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billion
AED budget.

Overall
, the biggest
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part
of the chart
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shows
the amount of money spent on social
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secutiry
and the smallest
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part
is for transportation. There are several other factors such as law and order, education, employment in industry and farming,
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defence
, taking care of the
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envirinment
and housing
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herritage
,
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aslo
debt interests and
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some
other
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costs
that
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make
half of the chart. Health and social services per person could
also
be counted
as a large
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part
of the pie chart.

Social and security is the
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part
with the highest
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spending
which is a
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cost
of 100
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billion
in a year. The
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socond
most
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spending
is for health and social services needs that
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costs
about 53
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billion
per year.
Also
, the third and fourth ones could be
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refferred
to learning systems and other payments with
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costs
of 38 and 23 billion.

The lowest
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spending
is 9
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billions
for transporting and 13
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billion
for industry and agriculture employment. The
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cost
of housing
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herritage
and habitant is
also
low and about 15
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billion
.
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