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The table shows the number of people using five types of transport in Australia from 2010 to 2014.

The table shows the number of people using five types of transport in Australia from 2010 to 2014. 262Lj
The table shows the number of people using five types of transport in Australia from 2010 to 2014. Overall, passenger vehicles are the highest vehicle which humans use and motorcycles are the means of transport that increase faster than others. In 2010, passenger vehicles were used by early 12, 000 people in Australia. And the number of users grew by about 1, 000 in 2014, change 10, 2 percent. Besides that, commercial vehicles are the second popular transport, 2, 300 people used in 2010 and reached about 400 in 2014, change 17, 4 percent, while motorcycle users were 65 people in 2010 and jumped over 30 percent in 2014, this is also the means of transport with the largest increase in the number of users. However, heavy trucks are only used by 384 people in Australia in 2010 and grew to 32 people after 4 years, the lowest increase in 5 types of vehicles. The last one was light trucks. In 2010, 106 light trucks were used and in 2014, the number of vehicles used is 131, reached 23, 5 percent.
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in Australia from 2010 to 2014.

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that increase faster than others.

In 2010, passenger
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by early 12, 000
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of users grew by about 1, 000 in 2014,
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after 4 years, the lowest increase in 5 types of
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