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Recent changes of island after construction

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The two maps show the main changes which have taken place in the island after the construction of tourist facilities. Overall, it can be seen that before, the island was green with lots of trees but today it becomes much more industrial with restaurant and accommodations. Firstly, the interesting changes which have been big improvements are that new restaurant and reception have been built in the center of the island. Also, new vehicle track has been built to connect the restaurant, reception and pier. On each side of reception, many accommodations have been constructed to rest. Between the accommodations, foot paths have been built as pedestrianization. Another striking change is that a new pier has been constructed in the south of the island. A final interesting development has been the introduction of a range of tourist facilities such as swimming and sailing on the shore area. The whole island has become a much more modern island with far more tourist and transport facilities.
The two maps
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which have taken place in the
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after the construction of tourist facilities.

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before
, the
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was green with lots of trees
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it becomes much more industrial with restaurant and accommodations.
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improvements are that new restaurant and reception have
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in the center of the
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island
.
Also
, new vehicle
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track
has
been built
to connect the restaurant, reception and pier. On each side of reception,
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many
accommodations have
been constructed
to rest. Between the accommodations, foot paths have
been built
as pedestrianization.

Another striking
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is that a new pier has
been constructed
in the south of the
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island
. A final interesting development has been the introduction of a range of tourist facilities such as swimming and sailing on the shore area. The whole
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island
has become a much more modern
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island
with far more tourist and transport facilities.
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IELTS academic Recent changes of island after construction

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6.5
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