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The pie charts below shows the online sales of books

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The public issue of "Mega Mutual Fund 1" is opening from today, i. e. 4th Bhadra. The issue will close on 10th Bhadra, 2078. If not subscribed fully by the early closing date, the issue can be extended till Bhadra 18. 10 crore units will be issued at a par value of Rs. 10 per unit. 15% of the total units have been allocated to the fund promoter Mega Bank. "Mega Mutual Fund 1" is a closed-end fund, meaning it can be traded in NEPSE. The fund has a maturity period of 10 years. Applicants can apply. . .
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